A theme park can bring out the inner child in a particular person once they ride one of the attractions of that marvelous place. All stress is alleviated as we see the visiting people smile, laugh and play. I remembered a ride we once rode that really enticed my and my fellow buddies; the Rio Grande Rapids. I woke up and realized that I was dreaming about revisiting
It was a chilly morning that day on September 3, 2009 when I woke up early, excited to go on an adventure with my closest college block mate friends. As I packed my things for the trip in my sturdy brown bag, I thought of bringing the most essential things so that I will have a blast later on. At the time of our meeting, as I was going to the meeting place by car at Lorenzo’s house, Denise See, my talkative Chinese friend, called me over the phone to ask what I was currently wearing. I was wondering why they literally shouted when they found out that I was not wearing green or white that day. I was shocked to know that all the boys as well as Mandz Zabat, my sweet and friendly block mate, were wearing green that day; while all the girls who will join us were wearing white. They did not plan anything before that date at all that is why I found it very amusing and funny. We rode excitedly in Jannyn Sioson and Lorenzo Reyes’ cars since we were too many to fit in one car. It was exciting for me because we were divided into boys and girls during our trip from SLEX to
After arriving at the famous theme park, we got more excited than ever as we took pictures of the entrance gate, and their mascot that was waving at us. Even though we have been to
The day ended as the beautiful moon shone up above in the sky along with brilliant glittering stars. The breeze stroked my skin and I felt a sudden chill down my spine; however, Mike embraced me and I felt comfortable, the feeling that will always be in my mind as I think of my friends. I observed that all the visitors were lining up and getting ready to go home after a tiresome day. They all looked tired but happy at the same time, reminiscing about what they did that day. The group and I were tired as well; however, we cannot contain ourselves from the happiness we had after that unforgettable day.
In that wonderful theme park, my friends and I always rode the “Rio Grande Rapids” because it was a thrilling and unique ride. The experience strengthened further our bonds as close friends. I learned that friends will always be there for you during good, and most especially during bad times when you think that all is lost. The memory continues to play in my mind as I reminisce my visit to
Writing a static descriptive essay requires a lot of patience since you are advised to apply the “show don’t tell principle”, wherein you must elaborate on the said activity to illustrate the situation rather than just mere telling it to the readers. I found it hard to compose since I do not elaborate on certain topics that much when I am telling stories or just talking to my closest peers. I also do not have the patience to elaborate on the topic that I chose; however, I believe that this is a very good essay to read on once you have mastered the art of the “show don’t tell principle”.
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